All, Here’s the on-line assignment for today (since I’ve had to cancel class due to the weather) If you are unable to leave these comments below, please email them to me!
1. Visit 5 of your classmates blogs at this link and leave constructive comments: http://www.art105bcc.blogspot.com/
2. Your comment must cover the following: Which three design principles could be considered more carefully in order to improve your (5) classmate’s overall designs, and how should these principles be specifically implemented? Be very specific to receive full credit. Remember, you are critique five (5) different projects made by five of your classmates.
3. With each of the five (5) designs you chose for question #1, choose one (1) personality “word/term” and describe how this word could be adjusted in order to reflect its meaning more accurately. Which design principles should be implemented (and how should they be specifically used) in order to get the “word or personality term” to express its meaning more directly?
I think you definately need more variety in scale and value.I am not quite sure where the focal point is suppose to be. The text in the words determined,hardworking, and strong all seem very similar as do the text in intelligent and confident. The word confident does not seem very confident to me, maybe its the thin text and the angle downword.
Hard to find a focal point. Each time I look at the project my eye sees something different each time. Variety in scale could really bring out some of your words and give them more meaning.
All,
ReplyDeleteHere’s the on-line assignment for today (since I’ve had to cancel class due to the weather)
If you are unable to leave these comments below, please email them to me!
1. Visit 5 of your classmates blogs at this link and leave constructive comments:
http://www.art105bcc.blogspot.com/
2. Your comment must cover the following:
Which three design principles could be considered more carefully in order to improve your (5) classmate’s overall designs, and how should these principles be specifically implemented? Be very specific to receive full credit. Remember, you are critique five (5) different projects made by five of your classmates.
3. With each of the five (5) designs you chose for question #1, choose one (1) personality “word/term” and describe how this word could be adjusted in order to reflect its meaning more accurately. Which design principles should be implemented (and how should they be specifically used) in order to get the “word or personality term” to express its meaning more directly?
Good luck and see you Monday!
Professor Groat
I think you definately need more variety in scale and value.I am not quite sure where the focal point is suppose to be. The text in the words determined,hardworking, and strong all seem very similar as do the text in intelligent and confident. The word confident does not seem very confident to me, maybe its the thin text and the angle downword.
ReplyDeleteHard to find a focal point. Each time I look at the project my eye sees something different each time. Variety in scale could really bring out some of your words and give them more meaning.
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